onilink19's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Transformers The Movie]

hmm...

not bad, animation can use a little work and it seems like a trailer more than a movie but this is still pretty kewl. good job.

[Teddy Bear Fight!!!!]

uhh...

it was a little short and they just kinda died with no fight or action. this would be better if you worked on the animation and gave it a more detailed plot. actually make them suffer, draw out the fact that they are bleeding TO their death. have one of them beat the shit out of the other in the background while two hold down one and saw off his arms and legs then right down the middle. not just one dies after the other randomly.
i'm sorry im not trying to be a dick or tell you how to make your flash im just pointing out problems and solutions.
this can be better if you work on it some more.

Little-Red-Bear responds:

nice idea! Thanks for the tips!

[Pen License]

aaaahhh maannn...

you shouldve kept going with this it was going great and i watched it twice just to make sure it wasnt my computer. this is fucking hilarious man. the animation was great but the music took a toll on my speakers but that probably my problem. other than that tis has series potential. you should start a 3rd grade nightmares collection or somethin. hell itd make a great dvd. id buy it.

[I Found A Dollar!]

not the greatest.....

but one of the best messages. weve all been there,finding a dollar on the ground, somelucky bastards get 5's,10's,20s' and only one lucky fuck i know snacthed a 100 right out of the wind when he was walkin down the street. but yeah anyone who can relate to this will get it. the animation wasnt too great but it didnt need to be. nice job.

NibzAU responds:

100 in the air? wow thats awesome

[Thanksgiving]

not bad

this would make a nice holiday greeting. but here on newgrounds i dont know how other may react. i thought it was nice. good job. maybe you could make something like this for the x-mas collab 08 this year.

[OoT 10th Anniversary]

nice.

this was a nice tribute. man i wanna know where you got the recording of that ocarina playing. the animation was decent but this was still pretty kewl. 8/5

[The Game Of Risk]

well....

that was random but boring