onilink19's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Legend of David 2]

FUCK YOU TUNA FISH!!!

that was no girl... that was a hermaphrodite fish! instant classic. i love how you summed up that damn child mission from the game in a twisted humorous flash.
still got my 10/5! now to part three!!!

[The Legend of David 1]

nice!

man this is some funny shit. the animations not bad, not the greatest but the flash makes up for it tenfold. the story is very accurate to the gameplay but hilarious and random at the same time. great job! you got my 10/5!

[Guitar Hero Rock Showdown]

uh what?

that was rather pointless and poorly animated,not funny, and no plot.

[Super Sonic Flys!!!!!]

man this can go further.

cmon you can do better than this! example super sonic gets hit by a plane and hurtles down onto sonic tails floats by and laughs,lookks and keeps going, or asks wtf.

[You Pop My Corn]

crunch....mmMMMmm...sweep,sweep,sweep...

the animation was pretty good and this was a random short n' sweet laugh. good job!

[TooF Girl Problems]

alright....

that was creative and funny. the animation is a little plain but it suits it perfectly. great job.

[MK vs DCU]

DAMN!

This shit isnt even my style, im not even remotely a fan of mortal kombat but the flash, batman, and superman were kewl. but i mean damn that shit was awesome! the animation was great. this was pretty action packed and even had a humorous twist. i loved this man great work. 10/5 dude, 10/5!!!

[My Dream]

amazing, truly amazing.

the animation was absolutely beutiful and the storyline is great. this is a masterpiece in the making. i cant wait to see this completed. man i must commend you this is an absolute artwork of a flash. 10/5 all the way!

[GameMaster 2: Mario]

OMFG!!!

That was the best damn flash ive seen all week. the animation was superb and the story was hilarious. i especially loved the accuracy of the mario game parodies. and man way to bring back dig - dug in a flash. this is overall fucking awesome!!! you've got to make a series! you got my 10/5!

[Emo Girl]

not bad.

this isnt bad for a first flash. it could use a little bit more of a detailed story and a longer one at that with more situations like a death in the family or a breakup. maybe go through a day in the life of the character instead of just the morning. you can also take this in a few directions like making it funny or serious. all you need to do for the animation is smooth it out some and yes, slow down the text scenes. but again not bad i'm sure you can take this further with a little more time thought and effort. if you change this i want to know.

carolshki27 responds:

i will change this but i wont delete this flash coz it's my first..hehe..im finished making opart 2 of this and yes..there is a storyline :)